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Connie 
Hello Emily. I think it's wonderful! Why don't you like it? Let me see... I'm going to look through it again and see if I can find anything wrong......
Thanks, Connie, I just don't feel like it's my best--actually, I know it's not my best, and I just didn't like this one all that much...
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(Ah ha! the plot begins to take form?)...
Possibly...
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Ok, yeah, I just read through it speedy like and I did find something you might not like but, I think it's fine... It was a smidgeon short. But I don't think it matters.
That was actually one reason I didn't like it.
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It was great. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Thanks, Connie
