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Connie
Hello Emily. Well, congratulations on completing a very successful story. It was very well written.
Thanks, Connie
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I was wanting to see what Emily used the glasses for, but not knowing didn't hinder the story any.
Er, we did get to see her use the glasses...
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SPOILER!!: the glasses posts
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Emily noticed a man with a twisted face point towards the house. She twisted under her tree and watched Harry, under his Invisibility Cloak, go through the front door of the house. Wait. Was he under his Invisibility Cloak? Emily stared at the spot in shock. So, that’s what these glasses do! They allow you to see hidden things! Emily thought in excitement. She concentrated on the house and the walls became fuzzy until it was as if there was a hole blasted through it. She could see inside the house. She took the glasses off and stared at them in amazement.
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She jumped up and peered around, her glasses still on, though lopsided. Her wand was out in a flash as she looked around at the doorstep of Grimmauld Place.
Harry, Hermione, and Ron were on the step, huddled together. Hermione’s hand was slipping from Harry’s as Yaxley was pulling her away. Emily gasped loudly as she swished her wand around, using a nonverbal spell. A blue light hit Yaxley at the same moment that Hermione hit him with a red one. It created a purple light, which hit his chest and he let go of Hermione, who Apparated her, Harry, and Ron out of there.
Emily stared at Yaxley as he looked round for the owner of the curse thrown at him. His other Death Eater friends were looking round too because they had seen the light fly by. But they didn’t see Yaxley yet; he was still hidden on the doorstep, staring around. Emily’s hand abruptly went to her stomach as she felt a pang of pain erupt inside her. She bent over, throwing up into the bush. As soon as she got her head back on, she stood back up, glaring at Yaxley.
“Flipendo!” she said out loud, pointing her wand at Yaxley. He was knocked sideways off of the steps and out of the protections of the Fidelius Charm. “Obliviate!” she continued. Yaxley looked extremely confused and in a daze when his fellow Death Eaters went to his side. They asked him what happened, but he couldn’t tell them; he had no idea who they even were. Emily smiled to herself as she tucked her mirror back into her purse and pulled out her Deluminator. She didn’t feel like sticking around for them to find her.
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I think your Epilogue was dear. Wow! Seven children

Great story Emily. You should be very proud.
Thanks, Connie. I am