Hello Maxie. I read this last night (rather after 2 this A.M.) but was too sleepy to comment. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but Ariel reminds me of Luna (J.K.'s Luna that is), a more hip and hype version though. This is meant to be a compliment because I think Luna is wonderful, a breath of fresh air.
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“Guess what? I was hoping nothing of that sort, French boy.”
Blunt and pulls no punches. No wonder beating around the bush wouldn't work.
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John still took a step back [Girls didn't scare him. Girls like Ariel did]
But he means to overcome his fear I bet.
So, I'm wondering if John is significant to Titan. Just a long shot curious type thing.
I'm also wondering who her friends are. I reckon I'll find out soon.Congratulations on putting up another ff. I hope to follow it as it is intriguing, and I cannot pass up the opportunity to be a super sleuth.
Great writing Maxie. I'll be watching for your next announcement for it.
All my love to you.