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Old 11-20-2010, 06:37 PM   #162 (permalink)
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Hello Allison. A very good chapter once again. I love the determination and strength you show Abby having. This is very good writing.
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I flew on and on, the woods never ending beneath me until I couldn't do it anymore. I swooped down, Fawx following me, before crashing on the ground, my body changing back to its normal form as I slid across the cold grass. My breathing was quickened and it was so dark outside that I was having a difficult time telling if anyone or anything was around me.
I don't think she had such a rough landing because she didn't know how to land. I think she flew long and hard until she just plain didn't have any more in her to continue on. Loved it!
I love the whole talking thing between her and Faux. And you wrote this part so it makes perfect sense.
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Some...the longer you have been able to transform the more I will be able to hear them. I can hear a fair bit though, especially since I helped you transform.
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No, but we have other means of communicating. He is my master after all.
Loved that part. I love Faux
Great post Allison. I hope Dumbledore will find a way to let Harry know she is safe.
I'll be watching for your next post.
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