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Emileyn · 11-16-2010, 07:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Connie

Hello Emily. Very nice writing.

Thanks, Connie.

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This one thing kind of bothers me though. And it isn't wrong or bad or anything like that but I don't know, it's almost like it's a choice she has to make, or a challenge from George. But at the same time it is meant I think to be an encouragement for her. I hope I am explaining what I'm thinking without criticizing or faulting you, because it is'nt either thing. Anyway, this is the part.

It's not a challenge at all, nor a choice... It's just him encouraging her that everything will be okay. I don't really see how can be construed as a challenge or choice, it was just him being there for her and letting her know that they can get through these losses together and that, though it will hurt for a while, they will be able to get through this.

11-16-2010, 07:15 PM	#1304 (permalink)
Emileyn I Nailed Wormtail Love Hunter Extraordinaire Mooncalf Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Not the beach Posts: 7,087	♥ 2G FC\| Narnian!\| Fremione\|Full Sail Girl ♥\| Dramione\| Shadowhunter!\| Jesse ♥ Quote: Originally Posted by Connie Hello Emily. Very nice writing. Thanks, Connie. Quote: This one thing kind of bothers me though. And it isn't wrong or bad or anything like that but I don't know, it's almost like it's a choice she has to make, or a challenge from George. But at the same time it is meant I think to be an encouragement for her. I hope I am explaining what I'm thinking without criticizing or faulting you, because it is'nt either thing. Anyway, this is the part. It's not a challenge at all, nor a choice... It's just him encouraging her that everything will be okay. I don't really see how can be construed as a challenge or choice, it was just him being there for her and letting her know that they can get through these losses together and that, though it will hurt for a while, they will be able to get through this.