Hello ~Otty.
What are you doing!?!?!??!!?!?!??!?!??!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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Freddie felt a sharp pang as it cut into his back like fire running rampant down his spine and he howled wildly his hands unable to clutch at the blade that was slowly killing him.
I thought you was teasing when you said:
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Don't look at me like that, I never said I'd only kill Ottery ... *evilgrin*
I don't know. I've been sitting here for most of an hour, and still
I don't know what to say. I guess I should have commented as I went along. A new approach maybe. I'll go to the beginning and pretend I haven't read any yet.
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You've got me blushing, I wish I were so good.
But you are!
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It surprises me how much the Roman Senate of the tv show is like modern politics. Pity really, it's all class struggle,
I know it right?! It's like, 'Planet of the Apes' all over again.
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but then again I could use those ambiguities
How often is anything ever what it seams? It will be mighty interesting if you can pull it off. But, I forget who I'm talking about here right? You can do it cause you're who you are.
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and what the devil is a Philly cheese steak any ways?”
Only the best sandwhich ever if it's made right!
Loved the bit where Madison is slightly agitated Freddy ate before the mission. And a little more cross at what he ate.
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“Which means someone we sent a kill order on obviously doesn’t like the prospect of death.”
It was these (people?) who poisoned Ottery? I hope Teddy finds out.
Teddy will see that justice is served, and very loudly served.
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Madison spread her arms and a blast of wind threw back everyone in her path. “Where’s this stupid flower?! Where?! So help me if you all make me look for it I’m going to tear this monastery apart stone by stone.”
Madison decided that to much time was being wasted, and got to the point. I like her style!
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Freddie smiled in spite of himself, he loved her spirit. Howling he didn’t notice the boy with the apple holding a silver knife. Freddie felt a sharp pang as it cut into his back like fire running rampant down his spine and he howled wildly his hands unable to clutch at the blade that was slowly killing him.
Full circle. Once again, I'm at a loss for words. I love your characters ~Otty, and I know it's only a story, but.... well....you know.... you get used to them being around all the time to go on Ottery's quests and all, and I just love them, and.... I don't want Ottery OR Freddy to die. Is there anything Madison can do? I mean she saved him before, like when his heart was broken, can you make her save him, ~Otty? Please?
It's ok ~Otty. It's your ff, and I love your story. I'm sure it's all good. I'll save my tears, for if and when it really does happen cause this might just be a cliff hanger of all cliff hangers.
Great post ~Otty. I'll be watching for your next post.
