Aaaaawwwweeee Heatherrrrrr......
I want a wedding just like that one, especially the joined wands and sparkler effect! *sigh* Hmmm... but why the hurry? I mean, I know they love each other, but WHY the hurry???
Oh, I must tell you that the best line in the entire chapter was definitely when McGonagall said:
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“You four, come with me.”
At first it sounded really strange, but when I thought about it, it was very appropriate. Ella is definitely a part of the HP trio! Great job! Most wouldn't have had the ability to enlarge the trio and have the forth fit in so well.
The only other question I have about the wedding is: Why did you not include the rest of the Greene family? I mean I realize there is a lot of them, but they could've been Apparated in... Is there a reasom, or was it just easier to leave them out?
I must admit, I am pleased that Ella is adult enough to accept all of the things that keep popping up unexpectedly in her short time at Hogwarts: Snape, Malfoy, Sirius and Lupin. A lesser person would be going crazy right about now, I think!
I love that you included Molly in the wedding. She is definitely my favourite character in the HP books. The woman is the ideal mother. She truly has a lot of love to share and is one of the strongest witches ever I think!
Great job, Heather. Your chapters are well developed and never boring! You give us all a run for our money! I can't wait until your next chapter!
Katie