Hello Emily. I don't understamd why this would be your least favorite chapter. It's very well written, and I don't see any reason at all for any chapter to be less favorable than any others. You've done a tremendous piece of work writing this ff so far, and I'm sure the rest is going to be just as great.
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“You don’t understand, Carlisle; these aren’t stab wounds like last time. Nothing can heal him except more magic. I need my book.” Emily glanced behind her but Alice was already gone. She appeared not even a second later, extending Emily’s book to Emily.
That Alice is a handy one isn't she?
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“I, er, need a favor. Can someone get in contact with George? Let him know he’s needed here. I need his help. I need him,”
There's the ticket.
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“I thought this guy was a douche or something,” commented Emmett.
I would never have thought of that as a description of Draco.
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She looked up and immediately started running.
I hope this means what I think it means.
Super post Emily. I'll be watching for your next.
