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Old 10-12-2010, 04:08 PM   #97 (permalink)
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Hello Alison. I can't believe how super your ff is. I've always loved it, but, it keeps getting better and better! Although I liked the book version of Dobby telling Harry about the room of requirements, I'm happy Neville gets to have some stardum. He could use the confidence booster.
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We all chuckled at Harry’s joke, and went further in the study the dummies and such. I ran my hand along the wooden chest of the one, which was at perfect height with me.
This is very curious Allison! Why is she drawn to this one? Are the dummies special to each person, or just this one to Abby for some reason?
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I closed my eyes, reaching out to where the memory might be coming from. My heart rate started to quicken as the memory started to come to me.
OK, so apparently this one is special to Abby, but what is she remembering?
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I jerked my eyes open at the feel of Harry’s hand on my shoulder. “You alright Abby?”

“Uh, yeah, I’m fine,” I said, turning around to face him.
Arg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why did he pick right then to put his hand on her? I mean, yeah, I wanted it to happen, but at a time when she'd be able to see that Harry could make her heart skip a beat just like Sheamus does. And I notice she didn't smile when she told him she was just remembered something. Is it not a good memory?
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As we walked out Harry stayed next to me. “You sure you’re okay?” Harry asked me quietly.
Ah good! Harry knows something is amiss. I hope she can tell him.
Great post Allison. I'll be watching for your next.
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