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Old 10-09-2010, 08:50 PM   #1083 (permalink)
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Hello Emily. I'll tell you that you put up a great new post. It's good to see Emily doing better.
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Emily sat in Alice’s bedroom, on her couch, and stared blankly at the mirror. She wanted to call George, but at the same time, she didn’t.
I'd like to ask a question about these mirror comunicators. Why has George not tried to call her? Is there a charm to block calls coming in? How would Snape call her if there was? Now about Emily: I understand her confusion and all about wanting to tell George or not. I don't agree with it though. What I think is, and I'm sure Emily thinks the same thing is, that she should tell him in person. She's afraid that George would try to forbid her to continue on with her mission? And she wonders weather or not she should also? I think she would continue on and finish her mission. And she would leave the same as she did the first time, except I hope she tells him good-bye with a kiss.
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“Dr...Draco?” Emily asked, surprised.
Ah, Draco I think is there to think. I know he is so confused himself. I don't think he'll hurt her. Maybe they can help each other.
Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next.
PS The above is my opinions ony. Weather they are right or wrong doesn't change the way I feel about your story. I think you do a great job with your writing. And if I'm wrong about the above, it's just fine with me also, cause I know that what ever you have for us will be great. I tend to ramble on, but I'm harmless really.
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