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KatielovesHP · 10-06-2010, 04:10 PM

That was really good, I would agree with Mordanyes about the colour but don't worry about the last line. Rose may have seen the tip of a turret for all we know. Keep writing, I loved it!!

Is there some Rose/Scorpius action occuring??? hmmm...can't wait!!

Katie xx (Oh and welcome to SS!)

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KatielovesHP Snidget Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Glasgow, Scotland :) Posts: 2,770	Wish I Was In Florida! \| The Avengers \| Music \| HP Boxset - my life since Xmas! \| Luna Lovegood That was really good, I would agree with Mordanyes about the colour but don't worry about the last line. Rose may have seen the tip of a turret for all we know. Keep writing, I loved it!! Is there some Rose/Scorpius action occuring??? hmmm...can't wait!! Katie xx (Oh and welcome to SS!) __________________ You're just a daydream away,I wouldn't know what to say if I had you. And I'll keep you a daydream away, Just watch from a safe place, So I never have to lose.