Hello Kae. I will start off saying I LOVE this post! All of it was very well written, but this is my favorite part:
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"So, Indie," Harry began, looking to Indie as she took a rather large and unladylike bite from her croissant, causing him to laugh as he spoke, "you excited to go back to Hogwarts?"
Indie, not bothering to swallow her croissant before she talked, said, "eh, i ood be ood is year."
Harry laughed a little louder this time, as Indie attempted to swallow her croissant.
"Shut up," she said after swallowing, hitting him lightly on the chest, "the croissant is good!"
"I'm sure it is," Harry said, still laughing quietly, "which is why there are still bits of it hanging off the sides of your mouth."
Harry reached up and gently removed the leftover croissant from Indie's mouth, as her cheeks turned a faint shade of red.
"Thanks, but I'm not 5 years old anymore, Harry," she said, wiping her mouth with a napkin, before turning to glare at a giggling Bella. Nobody but her had seemed to notice, aside from Ginny, who was standing with Mrs Weasley, glaring with scarlet cheeks from near the newsagency.
"Obviously you still act like a 5 year old, otherwise you wouldn't have had croissant hanging off your cheek," Harry laughed, as the clock chimed 10:45.
I laughed till I had tears running down my face. So good!
Although I love Harry/Ginny ship, and I do feel sorry for Ginny here, but, Harry is so much well suited for Indie.
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"Alright people, time to get going!" Tonks cried, loud enough for only the Weasleys, the Stewarts, Harry and Hermione to hear.
Mad-Eye stood up and then took charge, leaving Tonks behind in a huff.
Adding stuff like this, ^ makes the story so real. Well written, all of it. I'll be watching for your next notice.