Hello Emily. Please don't be afraid of anything I said in my last comment. It really is a great compliment when a writer can sway the feelings of the reader. And I trust your writing that you would never allow my feelings to stay guarded against Dumbledore. I know that you had to have things a certain way
for the other things whatever they are down the storyline to work correctly. I'm sure my love for Dumbledore will be reinstated. And besides, it's just this one and a couple other ff's that his reputation is in jeopardy.
Breath easy, your story is a great success, and you know I love it.
[QUOTE]“Well, well, well, who do we have here?” asked one of the guys as the other guy helped the one she had stunned off the ground. They circled her, her wand in one of their hands.[QUOTE]Go ahead punk, make her day.
Emily! That battle was breathtaking! I held my breath through the whole thing! Oh my goodness! I can't say anything, really I'm speechless.
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She watched the bloody scene in front of her fade away as different woods came into view. She staggered and fell over. She thought she heard her name, but wasn’t sure if she was imagining it or not. Her vision became blurry and she blacked out. The last thing that went through her mind was George’s smile.
Oh please Emily! Is she in safe hands?
So, she's in the woods.
I can't think where she might be. Was the name said in question like someone thought she was Emily? Or was the name said in surprise like she WAS recognized, but, couldn't believe she was there. OK, I have a theory, and I'll not reveal it to anyone to save my embarrassment if I'm wrong.
Outstanding post Emily. Can't wait for your next.
