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Old 10-02-2010, 06:08 AM   #40 (permalink)
Connie
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions

Hello ~Otts. I must say that from the very beginning your words planted such a masterfully painted picture. The contrast of the dark sky, the image of the airship not completely visible, but the stars, and the resplendent moon shining on Madison in her wonderful white cloak, that I have always loved by the way, just magnifies the image in my mind to breath taking beauty! Wonderfully written.

I loved the whole second paragraph, so much, but you explaied Fudge better here than I think I've ever heard him explained:
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Then there’s people like the old Prime Minister Fudge who is an incompetent oaf, who bungles in the face of his own idiocy but he’d rather do a bad job than let someone else do it better.
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"Focus, we're on an assignment to save Otty."
Yes Freddie. Your mission is to save our, 'Otty' You must stop being so adorable so Madison can keep her mind on the mission.
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Jo's interview inspired me,
Awe Otts, I think SS is full of FF's that are spectacular bcause of her inspiration she gives. But your talent is because you're just that good I think.
I loved your post! Great writing! I'll be watching for your next.
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