Hello Allison. Thanks for posting so soon. This was a great post. I can't tell what part I loved the most. One question though:
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"You'd be surprised how many people signed up mate," said Harry with a smile.
Did you mean for Harry to say this, ^ or was it Ron? This next part was too cute.
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"Come on, we don't want to be late for class," said Ron, pulling his bag onto his shoulder.
"Look at you wanting to be on time to Transfiguration," said Harry, surprise in his voice.
"Well you know how McGonagall is. She threatened to turn me into a toad if I'm ever late to her class this term."
And this part made me wish your post was longer.
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Our laughter filled the Great Hall before the doors shut, Professor Umbridge's eyes watching Harry and I like a hawk.
Why does she think she has to put her face in everything? She really irks me. Great post Allison. I'll be watching for your next.