Hello Heather. Wow you really packed a punch there! I'm so upset Draco could do such a thing! And I really enjoyed the comedy when the potion was having a different effect on Ron. He didn't know what to do, especially when she kissed him. It's good he took her to the hospital wing. And I think even though McGonagall's heart was in the right place, she should have let Ella have help with the ball decorations. What I didn't like was her calling Hagrid a big oaf. But, it was the poison working on her wasn't it. This part was my favorite part of the chapter.
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Snape put his head down. Ella was his best pupil. She was his apprentice. The thought of her almost dying was devastating.
“ Trust me I will make it right.” Snape had a hurt look on his face.
“ Oh, Ella I know you made the wreath on my door.”
“ It was beautiful thank you.”
I'm anxious to see what Snape does to Draco, and I hope Dumbledore throws in a kick in the pants also. It was so dangerous what he did.
I'll be watching for your next post Heather.