Hello Emily. Thank you for setting my worries to rest. Very nicely written, all of it.
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“You two, get out here!” Remus shouted at them.
“No! We’re staying to fight!” Emily yelled back.
“George, get her out of here!” Remus shouted firmly.
Remus is going to be furious with him for allowing her to go on a mission.
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“It’s okay, Ems, I’m right here. I’m not leaving you,” he said frantically as he wiped her tears away.
It was good of Emily to let George comfort her, but I don't think she was worried he was going to leave her was she? She just let him go on because she knew it gave him comfort to console her in anyway. And she needed as much of him as she could get at the moment.
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She packed her toothbrush and toothpaste because hygiene was a necessity for her.
I loved you putting this in!
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She wanted it to go slowly so it seemed like she had more time with her husband, but it flew by, and eventually she had to leave.
Isn't that always the way it goes?
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Snape called her via mirror, saying that Death Eaters were waiting outside of Grimmauld Place, waiting for the golden trio. He said that they would slip eventually and need her help. So, she decided she’d leave the next morning and made sure that she stayed with George the entire day. She asked him to stay home for work, and he agreed.
Oh no
Emily, please be careful!
Great post Emily. Very nice writing. Good job. I'll be watching for your next post.