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CharGryffindor · 09-16-2010, 05:28 PM

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Originally Posted by CreativeAllie18

Alice was actually starting to feel comfortable on the broom. She had even slackened her grip slightly on the broom handle.

What. An. Idiot.

Alice could feel that the broom was starting to move faster. She started to pull back at the top, like one was supposed to when they wanted to stop, but needless to say it wasn't working. Alice kept pulling and pulling, but the broom seemed to just go faster and faster.

"Stop. Stop. STOP!" Alice said, practically screaming in terror at the broom.

Alice was squeezing the broom handle so hard at this point that her fingers were starting to hurt. As the broom continued to launch forward Alice let out a small gasp as she saw the barrier getting closer. Oh no. Oh no.

"Stop, stop, you're going to hit the wall!" Alice screamed at the broom as if it was an actual person and could actually understand what she was saying. But no matter...it was too late anyway.

Alice felt herself hit the barrier with such force that it was as if someone had slammed a brick into her chest. Alice had somehow managed to slid off the back of the broom at the point of impact, and was now falling. Her worse nightmare come to life Alice hastily reached out and grabbed the broom, hanging there, utter terror filling her entire body. Alice attempted to take a deep breath but couldn't, the wind still knocked out of her.

After a couple of moments and much coughing Alice managed to breathe. She looked down, her arms starting to shake from the difficulty of holding her up. Alice felt her breathing start to quicken.

"It's okay. Just don't panic," Alice said, desperately looking around her. Somebody help?

Rubiey watched in horror as Alice went flying towards the invisible barrier, directly over where the GlitterPuff and the other kid had hit earlier.

"ALICE! PULL UP!" She screamed, but Alice couldn't hear her. Oh no.

She sped forwards as Alice hit the barrier, but managed to keep hold of her broom, and Rubiey stopped just before the place were Alice had hit. She'd be no help if she crashed too, would she?

"Alice? Its gonna be fine. Just DONT PANIC. I'm only a couple of feet below you, so I'm going to come up slowly. Get on the back of my broom, and keep hold of yours. Okay?" She said slowly, making sure Alice could understand her shaky voice.

09-16-2010, 05:28 PM	#83 (permalink)
CharGryffindor Firecrab Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Pigfarts, Mars. Posts: 925 Hogwarts RPG Name: Rubiey O'Rielly Fourth Year	Rubiey Post Dos (two) :) Quote: Originally Posted by CreativeAllie18 Alice was actually starting to feel comfortable on the broom. She had even slackened her grip slightly on the broom handle. What. An. Idiot. Alice could feel that the broom was starting to move faster. She started to pull back at the top, like one was supposed to when they wanted to stop, but needless to say it wasn't working. Alice kept pulling and pulling, but the broom seemed to just go faster and faster. "Stop. Stop. STOP!" Alice said, practically screaming in terror at the broom. Alice was squeezing the broom handle so hard at this point that her fingers were starting to hurt. As the broom continued to launch forward Alice let out a small gasp as she saw the barrier getting closer. Oh no. Oh no. "Stop, stop, you're going to hit the wall!" Alice screamed at the broom as if it was an actual person and could actually understand what she was saying. But no matter...it was too late anyway. Alice felt herself hit the barrier with such force that it was as if someone had slammed a brick into her chest. Alice had somehow managed to slid off the back of the broom at the point of impact, and was now falling. Her worse nightmare come to life Alice hastily reached out and grabbed the broom, hanging there, utter terror filling her entire body. Alice attempted to take a deep breath but couldn't, the wind still knocked out of her. After a couple of moments and much coughing Alice managed to breathe. She looked down, her arms starting to shake from the difficulty of holding her up. Alice felt her breathing start to quicken. "It's okay. Just don't panic," Alice said, desperately looking around her. Somebody help? Rubiey watched in horror as Alice went flying towards the invisible barrier, directly over where the GlitterPuff and the other kid had hit earlier. "ALICE! PULL UP!" She screamed, but Alice couldn't hear her. Oh no. She sped forwards as Alice hit the barrier, but managed to keep hold of her broom, and Rubiey stopped just before the place were Alice had hit. She'd be no help if she crashed too, would she? "Alice? Its gonna be fine. Just DONT PANIC. I'm only a couple of feet below you, so I'm going to come up slowly. Get on the back of my broom, and keep hold of yours. Okay?" She said slowly, making sure Alice could understand her shaky voice. __________________ When your lips touch mine, it's the kiss of life. Last edited by CharGryffindor; 09-16-2010 at 06:12 PM.