Hello Maxie. Thank you for your time to give us this wonderful chapter! I've been waiting ever since I got the notice you posted to come here and read, wondering what you had for us that could top your last chapter. And then I begin, finally, to read. Where to begin? I guess with the beginning. Your chapter title, "Love is Not Love"
What could you mean? So reading through the chapter I make sure to watch for clues. Atara dreams of the love of a man she deems worthy of her, yet she strikes out in violence to him, for his love is not for her but Guinevere, instead. And also, Atara can't allow her dear friend, Guinevere, to run off with a human, because she loves her too much (she says) to allow her and her family to be disgraced. And when she see's the love will not be denied; she kills Guinevere. That love was not love, in either case. Of course, it is only my assumption that she is the one who killed her.
Moving on. I'm intrigued about who has the gruby little hands that captured Ginny's owl. Oh my goodness!
You cannot guess the thoughts that are going through my head about this. I won't say anything though.
I stop reading over and over the chapter parts I'm trying to work out the mystery of and come to this:
Quote:
In another time - perhaps in the same -
I mean
what can this mean? It's like the begining, Love is not love.
More time thinking on this whole chapter. And I will search, and search.
But what it all boils down to is weather I'm right (highly improbable) or wrong (probable) I'll just have to wait and see what you have for us to find out.
Excellent writing Maxie, and I want you to know I do love this story so very much. I miss you, and send much love to you.
