Hello Emily. Again, I am speechless as to what I can say. And no, that's not a bad thing from your story telling. It's just well, It's soooooooooooooo sad! I love the presentation of the story very much here. We all knew it was coming, but, still you made it seem like it's the first time I heard about Bill, and Dumbledore. The devistation was real, and the heartache for our lovely Emily was real. You see, I was wondering how you would present Emily, since she obviously already knew about the things to come. And you made the news overwheming for her just as if she didn't know. It's because death, distruction, and devistation is hard to take in no matter how many times you hear of it, when it involves the ones you love. Tremendous writing Emily. I'll be watching for your next post. Oh! Wait, there is one thing:
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He also gave her a book about different wounds and how to treat them, including curses.
I'm taking this as an advance warning of terrible things to come. Great work Emily.
