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emilyblack 
I could have sworn I commented on this chapter, but I don't see it,
Emily you did cause I also commented and your comment was there. I don't know whats happened
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“Didn’t I tell you that’s how he sleeps?” he said, being all proud of himself. “At least we know he’s resting well.”
I think someone feels bad about punching Harry!
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“Ginny,” he said quietly, “I don’t know what went on yesterday, but I hope I didn’t hurt yor scare you. Professor Dumbledore said we were flying together.”
Aww...Harry is such a gentleman!
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The two humans clung to each other tightly in the magical forest with night birds singing their songs, warning of doom and despair. Small animals scurried away in fright as leaves were moved by something traveling in stealth. A heard of Centaurs galloped nearby and alarmed the birds into flight. Hippogriffs galloped and then flew off, their wings moving massive amounts of air, making a deep swooshing sound. Wolves were baying to each other to let all know of a loved one lost or perhaps an easy kill spotted some place close for the pack to feast upon. In the midst of these ordinary sounds one would hear in this particular forest, were the two humans standing as statues in the same spot they were when they were brought together, oblivious of all noise and movement around them. A solitary beam of moonlight shone brightly through a break in the thick canopy above the forest, falling brilliantly on the couple.
This was beautifully written. The descriptions were excellent. You could picture everything down to the last detail.
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“Lissy, you make me dizzy.”
Cute!!!
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They stopped, first surprised, and then happy to see the minister, and stood respectful to him in the moonlight with God giving His blessing through songbirds chirping the splendor of the soon to be consummated union
Aww..Its so lovely. I'm so glad they are finally man and wife!
“What is it child? What’s happened to you now?” Madame Pomfrey asked anxiously. [/QUOTE] Something usually always happens to Harry. I can understand why that is her immedient response
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“Nothing, I want to fly, I need to practice for Quidditch. We have a game and I can’t convince you that I’m okay, so I had an idea. See the LED Monitor?” They both looked at it. It just showed Harry lying on the bed. “Now, LED Monitor, show me if I’m okay and able to fly.
Aw bless the wee clever cloggs
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“Mum! Can’t someone help my Mum? Please!” Frozen rain was cutting into his skin, but he knew nothing of this or the fact that he was falling without his broom from a height that would kill him when he hit the ground.
Aww. Thats a shame. Poor harry
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Everyone was screaming in the stands and Cedric Diggory, boasting the captured snitch, turned gleefully and triumphantly to respond to the crowd,
Ceedric, do something usefull and help Harry!
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Dumbledore’s spell greatly slowed Harry’s rapid decent, and the enchanted ground gave way and bounced Harry like a trampoline
Phew! I'm glad he's safe!
Great Post Connie. I know it's only a short review but I've been told to get off the internet now. Personally I think it's up to you how many times you post but I'm just frightened it ends to quickly.
I think now we'll see Lizzy and Harry get closer. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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