Hello Allison. This post is very good, and I was sorry it wasn't longer. But, don't worry. I'm not faulting you. It would have to be the rest of the story to make me satisfied.
I just love your story!
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Harry motioned I should come with him, so I got up and followed him upstairs. I could feel a pair of eyes on my back so I reached out, and to my surprise found it was Seamus's.
I hope she's not dating that loony bin. Harry doesn't deserve her at all...she's too good for him anyway.
I was in such a state of shock from what I heard that I tripped at the top of the steps and nearly took Harry down with me. Harry turned around and steadied me, a concerned look on his face.
"Are you alright?"
"Oh, yeah, I'm fine," I said with a shaky laugh. "Just being anxious doesn't help with my naturally clumsy disposition."
That was probably my favorite part of the post. I do think it's important for Harry to trust her, and I'm so glad he does. And I think it's brilliant how she keeps one step ahead of Umbridge!
Great post Allison. I'll be watching for your next.