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Jessica · 08-26-2010, 05:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Maxilocks

Sudden in its birth, hauntingly slow in its death, the scream that the winds had scattered through the remnants that had once been a town well-loved, faltered, wavered and faded away, as if the rock-and-stone ruins it had scattered over, had shattered it into tiny pieces.

Oh wow. Your descriptions get better every day dahlin'!!

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Then it was the night and Jenna ---

Beautiful!

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She did not have the presence of mind to step back, scream or run – the first should have been an instinctive reaction, though the second was something not in her nature, and the initial scream in itself had been one of surprise, more than fear; while the third, the third was so much against her own nature, that she did not even think of it.

For some reason, I can't imagine Jenna running off the scene either. I can however imagine myself doing that.

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anyone would have thought the atmosphere dark, cold, terrifying – Jenna thought it dark, cold and major cause for disappointment.

I like this girl. I really do. Good characterization Maxo!

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The double-doors opposite her were open, and in front of her stood Voldemort, leaning very casually in the doorway of Mangeant Mansion.

For all the anger that I feel at him for doing this to her, I have to say he's pretty daaaaarrn classy.

Update soon!!!

Love,
~~Jay~~

08-26-2010, 05:50 AM	#643 (permalink)
Jessica Nogtail Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere Posts: 4,526 Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3	JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote: Originally Posted by Maxilocks Sudden in its birth, hauntingly slow in its death, the scream that the winds had scattered through the remnants that had once been a town well-loved, faltered, wavered and faded away, as if the rock-and-stone ruins it had scattered over, had shattered it into tiny pieces. Oh wow. Your descriptions get better every day dahlin'!! Quote: Then it was the night and Jenna --- Beautiful! Quote: She did not have the presence of mind to step back, scream or run – the first should have been an instinctive reaction, though the second was something not in her nature, and the initial scream in itself had been one of surprise, more than fear; while the third, the third was so much against her own nature, that she did not even think of it. For some reason, I can't imagine Jenna running off the scene either. I can however imagine myself doing that. Quote: anyone would have thought the atmosphere dark, cold, terrifying – Jenna thought it dark, cold and major cause for disappointment. I like this girl. I really do. Good characterization Maxo! Quote: The double-doors opposite her were open, and in front of her stood Voldemort, leaning very casually in the doorway of Mangeant Mansion. For all the anger that I feel at him for doing this to her, I have to say he's pretty daaaaarrn classy. Update soon!!! Love, ~~Jay~~ __________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life