Hello Emily. I'm going to start off saying great post, because it was!
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“At least Lucius won’t be here,” she whispered.
“I think you spoke too soon,” Alicia whispered as her eyes turned pink. Emily and Draco stopped dead in their tracks, staring at her.
Ahhhh. I was afraid of that. It's what makes sense afterall. He is the one having them spied on afterall.
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“He made a spur of the moment decision to make it so he could confront us.
Ah! Well, so he wasn't planning on being there. It was just Blaise being stupid all along. I wonder what he hoped to accomplish.
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“Is that a threat?” Alicia spat.
Alicia!!!!!!!!!
There is a time one can... well never mind. There is never a time when a child (don't let your blood boil) can challenge an evil wizard when he is angry, and make things better.
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“Oh and there’s one more thing… Draco’s coming to live with us,” she said quietly.
Hmmm... I don't see how this can work. But, the poor boy does need a place to stay. And who knows, this could be the thing that turns things around in the future.
Great post Emily. You are a very creative writer. Both of you are. I'll be watching for the next post.