Hello Heather. I enjoyed your chapter, and I think it was well rounded. I love the fact that McGonagall warns her that she must keep her other classes up, or she can have the extra potions taken away. I love that although she is a wiz in potions she can still have a bad day. I love that she is herself at all times and we see her at her best and her worst. Loved the starry night she made for herself, and I love that she listened to Harry, and made up with her friends.
The letters from her sisters made me love them also. It's cute how they all say they are the best sister. True sister rivalry all in love though. Can't wait to see what happens next about Harry and the Goblet of Fire.
Great post Heather. I'll be watching for your next.