View Single Post
Old 08-09-2010, 03:15 AM   #763 (permalink)
Connie
Gryffindor
Puffskein
 
Connie's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Florida
Posts: 1,415

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Janet Lynn Gordon
Fifth Year
Default
Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions

Hello Emily. I love how well you place the simplest wording that shows what's going on in a person.
Quote:
“Tonks, I’m glad you could make it,” Emily exclaimed as she hugged a mousy looking Tonks.

Tonks smiled lightly. “Well, I haven’t seen you in a while and wanted to see what’s up,” Tonks said.
Her emotional heartache is evident, and I feel so sorry for her.
Quote:
Emily pulled her hands from Tonks’ grip and played with the rigidly cut ring on her finger.
I've said it before. There could be something hidden about these rings. Maybe Hermione sees some ancient runes on it and she deciphers it and it causes you to be able to see the image of the person wearing the other ring.

Great post Emily. I'll be watching for your next.
Connie is offline