Hello Heather.
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Connie- I was born in Warren .
Wow! Way northeast. I love how you've made the transition from her old home to her new, and she alrady has some things she loves doing. That's great!
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Jenny was twelve years older than Ella, but they were the closest out of the four Greene sisters.
I love how you include the relationship of the family members. And I love Jenny!
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“Listen, Jen The truth always prevails, I know the prophet doesn’t get that , but trust me your time will come.”
This was a very sweet thing to say. I also wonder if it is a prophecy.
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Ella this is Harry Potter, and Ronald Weasley” “Hello, they echoed.” “We are all in Gryffindor.” Ella , read on the houses , and hoped to also be placed in Gryffindor.
Oh, I want her to be in Gryffindor too!
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I promise next chapter, she will be at Hogwarts = )
I know I made some paragraph's kinda long , but I needed to show the relationship between Ella and Jenny.
I Will Post another chapter this week.
Enjoy = )
Heather, you don't have to make promises to us. Just relax, and enjoy writing your story as you see fit, and we'll enjoy reading it just as much as you enjoy writing it. Can't wait to read more.
