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Old 07-12-2010, 10:46 PM   #27 (permalink)
Connie
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Janet Lynn Gordon
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Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions

Hello Kae. Wonderful post. I can't believe I didn't comment on this already! I read it, when you posted. Anyway, sorry 'bout that.
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Indie was in shock. Hermione...asking for help?
It's good Indie kept her composure! I myself might have passed out!
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"You do all my homework until Christmas!" she added, smiling widely and cheekily, her eyes twinkling.
Almost instantaneously, Hermione smirked, her features spelling out disbelief, causing Indie's face to fall.
"You'll help me with my homework?" she asked, looking hopeful.
Hermione laughed, shaking her head at her friend's antics.
"Okay," she said, nodding now as she spoke, and also looking extremely happy, thoguh dazed also.
Loved that piece of writing. I love how real you make Indie, even though she has such outstanding abilities!
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Hermione followed Indie's gaze, and sighed happily when she saw the boy, sinking her chin into her open hand and having her eyes glaze over.
How cute is that!? Hermione sure as it bad.
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"Duh!" Bella interrupted, "We all know she's been writing madly to that Krum boy from Durmstrang."
Don't you love it when you can one up someone who thinks they know everything?
Great post Kae! I'll be watching for your next.

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