Sophie, that was great! I so much adore this line, and the feelings with it.
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I walked over to him and helped him. "What are you like?" I smiled.
Cho had her chance. She needs to get over herself.
I wonder if Harry should work on the way he gives bad news. His delivery needs major work.
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"Nothing you didn't already know. Although, I'm leaving in two days." He told me.
I loved this whole part! My heart would be ponding out of my chest!
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"How long will you be gone?" I asked suddenly frantic. I knew he was going, but I didn't relise it was so soon. I began to feel all the happiness and life drain away from my body. I was scared, but I had to be strong for Harry. I couldn't begin to imagin how he was feeling. My emotions got the better of me and tears began to escape from my eyes.
Sophie, seriously, don't think we would ever hate you. It's a great story, and your doing wonderful with it.
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Please don't hate me...I know he leaves and its all say and stuff so it gets just a tad depressing but we need to stick by Ginny.
I'll be giving Ginny all my support. Great work Sophie. I'll be watching for your next.