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Old 07-09-2010, 05:23 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi Heather!

Great new chapter! I love how you shrunk the furniture et al in order for the family to move! Your last couple of lines were priceless!

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“ Ella R Greene, why aren’t you packing?"

She rolled her eyes. “When does school start again?”
This is perfect... the fact that the parents are able to apparate and disapparate makes skiving a hard thing for Ella to do. Ella's reply is pure gold. We know how much she hates the thought of going to Hogwarts, yet, she prefers it to unpacking. It made me laugh. Typical teen-aged behaviour!

Keep up the great work. I can't wait until Ella gets to Hogwarts!

Katie
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