Hello Emily. I loved it all. Very moving, and touching. Posting late like I'm now unfortunately and unintentionaly doing, makes it hard to say anything that hasn't already been said. I'm sorry. You are very talented in your writing and you deserve better. You bring life to your story, and allow us to view the pictures in our minds, as we read each sentence.
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"So kiss me and smile for me. Hold me like you’ll never let me go,
I can help you out with this if you like. It's from one of my favorite songs. "Leaving On A Jet Plane" by Chantel Kreviazuk. It was sung by various artists, my favorites being, Peter Paul and Mary, John Denver, and also, Roger Whittaker. Peter Paul and Mary being my favorite.
Great post as always Emily. I'll be watching for more.