07-05-2010, 01:26 AM
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Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie If Mageant Mansion had a history, it was not one that the pages of the noun saw, or would ever see. Lovely start. Quote:
Money loves to pull, into illusion, those that own it. It loves, too, to ruin the illusions that it can create.
It is always indifferent – it is we, who are not.
I love reading your little nuggets of philosophy, Maxo. Beautifully said! Quote:
Voldemort, when he had decided that the Mansion in question would make yet another perfect stronghold, had found it easy to tackle the wolves – he had not driven them off, but driven them to himself.
I love how this is put! It shows exactly who he is and why he is that. He knows how to do what he wants to do, when not to alienate. Quote:
He had the metaphorical fangs of a snake, and a tongue of honey, and he could show both, and show none, simultaneously or when he wanted to.
Once again wonderful description! Quote:
All this, in a way that none were aware that the evil of the wolves had been taken away, and replaced by a much more cultured, much more barbaric one.
This update is just all around full of awesome! I love this bit too. The average person would think the wolves a worse presence. But in actual his invisible, wolfless evil is far worse. Quote: Other factors have come into play. I have no control over them, anymore. I can not be strong, in the face of what makes us strong. In the face of what makes us strong....... I wonder what she means. Knowing Jenna, it could be courage, trust and love. I wonder if one, more or all of these are 'factors.' I am intrigued! Quote:
The cheek to not be alert, and to think – when on an errand for him – of a sister opposed to his very actions, would cost her.
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It happened, very suddenly – to her right, a pair of scarlet-tinted, orange eyes gave a sudden glint. Less than half a second later, a scream had ripped out of her throat, and the wind seemed to carry it everywhere, let it magnify, echo and then plummet into a startling, hauntingly indifferent darkness.
OMG! What has happened?!! And I told you people would read if you update! =D =D
Love,
~~Jay~~
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