Hello Emily. Well now we know, don't we. You can write happy, this we know, just as well as you can write sad.This also is what we know. But, now we know you can write pain, just as well. Excellent writing Emily.
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“Sirius—” he choked out. Emily’s heart went to the tips of her toes. What about Sirius could make Remus act like this? There was only one thing and she knew it.
This is such an awful feeling, and yet you have to hear the words to believe your feelings.
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*Tell me watchya think... :/
But, surely you get tired of hearing how great you are?!
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No, just teasing. I'm happy to give praise where praise is due. You've written a very good chapter, and I'll be watching for your next.