Ohhhhhhhh I have goose bumps for real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so unbelievably amazing!!!!! I agree with Kate great idea with the circle and all.....poor poor Albus, hopefully they'll save him, because I can't really imagine how it would be for Harry if something like this actually came through.....
He he Katie I understand the chanting too girl!!!!! Though yeah it's not really important, only creepier if you can't understand what it says I guess.....
This thing with the portkey to the other world kind of reminds me of Hell Boy you know where he opens the portkey to the world of evil, but then thankfully it gets closed again......I really wish you won't get through with the whole ritual because seriously you can't actually think of bringing Voldemort back, right???? RIGHT???? Right. And where's Cornelia? Is she okay? I'm not all the interest in her, but James seems to be and I don't want to see him getting hurt all over again, when he's been through so much... Probably why you put Albus in this situation and not James, for variation, huh?? Okay, done talking, it's just that I haven't commented in here for about six million years and I'm over excited that I am doing it now Please be kind and caring and a good writer and PAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<-----before I go crazy)
Maria