Hello Emily, great post. I'll be watching for your next post.
OK, I can't do this. I must comment more than that.
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Emily sighed. “I guess you caught me,” she said as she moved her mouth away from him. He groaned quietly. Emily giggled.

When will boys learn that girls are sooooo much better at playing cat and mouse.
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“Have you heard the joke about the cookie?” Emily asked, giggling. Angelina huffed and stalked off.

How, oh how could she leave before the punch line?
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“It’s okay, it was pretty crummy,” Emily said with the wave of her hand.
Hehehe, I'm glad I stayed for the punch line. I love this whole chapter Emily. You write so it feels like I'm there the whole time!
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Emily looked back at the lake. She then noticed a picnic basket under her tree. She started breathing heavily. They couldn’t eat there—that was her and George’s tree.

Oh No!
Great post Emily! I'll be watching for your next chapter.