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HannahLongbottom · 06-06-2010, 12:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Princess!Mel

GAH, yay for updates!

Once again, amazing!

I can just imagine Hermia as a teen. Oh Merlin...

But that was really sweet, with her and little Remus!
And Lalita... I have a feeling there might be a catfight coming on, probably started by Hermia. But who knows?

Hermia as a teen is a mixture of three of the girls I went to school with, all of whom were... not the friends my mother would have chosen for me! But we always had a good time

She is sweet with Remus *sniffles*

Catfight? Hermia? Really?

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Originally Posted by Miss!Maxie

Yeah, we all know what he is...

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That is kind of... nostalgic. <3

Oh good! It was supposed to feel that way!

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My God, that is too adorable. I love little!Remus.

Oh don't start that!

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These two are TOO CUTE FOR WORDS!

-LOVES on them-

I was thinking that bit was sickly sweet, but apparently not!

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Lalita? Is that supposed to ring a bell? Because it does.

O__o

YUSH! Looks like it was supposed to ring a bell.

... and I got mentioned. xD

GREAT update. Very well-written.
Update soon. <3

I hope you like how I introduced Lalita, even though I don't think I told you *who* she is...

And of course you got a mention! You found the girl that was in my head!

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Originally Posted by My!Favourite!Paintbrush

I'm back and loving every second of it Jools!

This is brilliant! The drama between Ashtad and Hermia is brilliantly portrayed, the flashbacks add just enough explanation to the story, the characters are well defined, descriptions and dialogue are all wonderful...

Can't wait to read more!

*does a happy dance*:ballet: You're back!

You say the nicest things! I've missed you!

06-06-2010, 12:45 AM	#95 (permalink)
HannahLongbottom SS 100 Triumphant! Ramora Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: PININ for the FJORDS Posts: 5,639 Hogwarts RPG Name: Hadley Taylor Fourth Year	Canon Niffler \|\| Neville's Yorkshire Pudding \| \| Teddy's Biographer \|\| P + R = ♥ Quote: Originally Posted by Princess!Mel GAH, yay for updates! Once again, amazing! I can just imagine Hermia as a teen. Oh Merlin... But that was really sweet, with her and little Remus! And Lalita... I have a feeling there might be a catfight coming on, probably started by Hermia. But who knows? Hermia as a teen is a mixture of three of the girls I went to school with, all of whom were... not the friends my mother would have chosen for me! But we always had a good time She is sweet with Remus sniffles Catfight? Hermia? Really? Quote: Originally Posted by Miss!Maxie Yeah, we all know what he is... Quote: That is kind of... nostalgic. <3 Oh good! It was supposed to feel that way! Quote: My God, that is too adorable. I love little!Remus. Oh don't start that! Quote: These two are TOO CUTE FOR WORDS! -LOVES on them- I was thinking that bit was sickly sweet, but apparently not! Quote: Lalita? Is that supposed to ring a bell? Because it does. O__o YUSH! Looks like it was supposed to ring a bell. ... and I got mentioned. xD GREAT update. Very well-written. Update soon. <3 I hope you like how I introduced Lalita, even though I don't think I told you who she is... And of course you got a mention! You found the girl that was in my head! Quote: Originally Posted by My!Favourite!Paintbrush I'm back and loving every second of it Jools! This is brilliant! The drama between Ashtad and Hermia is brilliantly portrayed, the flashbacks add just enough explanation to the story, the characters are well defined, descriptions and dialogue are all wonderful... Can't wait to read more! does a happy dance:ballet: You're back! You say the nicest things! I've missed you! __________________ Last edited by HannahLongbottom; 06-06-2010 at 12:56 AM.