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Old 06-04-2010, 06:00 PM   #166 (permalink)
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Okay Connie, Sweetie....

Let's get the frivolities out of the way and get right down to business... That is another great chapter!!!! The way you come up with these ideas is simply intriguing to me... we definitely must talk...

Now, down to business...

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Crookshanks looked at Ron and ate the spider.
I can not believe the mind-games you have Crookshanks playing on poor Ron, and ultimately, Scabbers. Mind you, Scabbers definitely has it coming. I can just hear the sound of those spider's legs crunching; it still gives me the shivers!

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Ron caught Crookshanks and bodily threw him to Hermione.
Hmm... I found this so out of character for Ron. I guess everyone finally has a breaking point though. I bet he would've been totally shattered if he had hurt Crookshanks by mistake. In saying this, I also think that Ron was never actually going to go over-the-top with his anger. He just wanted to really stress his point with Hermione.

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Ron feels bad for getting hand-me-downs, but, I wonder how he’d feel if by the time it came to him there wasn’t anything to hand down.
My hat goes off to Ginny in this instant of maturity. She knows how Ron feels about hand-me-downs, but rather than complain for herself, she worries about her parent's feelings and simply refrains from asking for new stuff. This is really something for a 12-year-old, I think. Her goal is simply one of happiness.

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“Oh I know, I just can’t get over how bold and blunt you are,” admitted Hermione.
I really enjoyed this little tidbit of conversation. It is amazing how we girls tend to never bore of talking about our "beaus". The love, gossip and giggles that Ginny and Hermione constantly share, in terms of Harry and Ron, is hilarious and true to the conversations of young women.

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Crookshanks was ecstatic with this bit of information! “Moondrop is here!” he thought. “I’ll have to visit Ravenclaw House and find her. And kittens!” He was so happy.
I'm glad you have finally brought a little happiness into Tom/Jim/Crookshank's life. It brings a whole new dimension to his character. The idea that he could be a Daddy is heart-lifting... and by the way... if Tina doesn't take the soon-to-be offered kitten... I will gladly take one or two of them. All I need now are a couple of good names...

All kidding aside, Connie, this was a truly inspirational chapter. I can't wait until the next one. See you next week...

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