OMG! :O
Thalia, that was amazing! The detail and creativetedness [

] was fantastic! I love how you took it from the father's point of view, I probably would've never thought about it in such a way like that for a while. To be honest, I was crying. I was superrr sad and I'll wonder how my dad feels about how I'm growing up.
I absolutely loved the story and you definitley need to keep on writing! I'll look forward to more!
Jess(: