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Old 05-28-2010, 10:09 PM   #163 (permalink)
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Connie.

Two words... Loved it! As the chapters, and Thursdays, quickly fly by, I become more and more engrossed in your chapters. You out did yourself this week. The torment that Sirius was feeling, as the thought about his lady-love, Lissydove, was almost excruciating. It tore my heart out to imagine the crazy look in his eyes and yearning in his heart and voice.

The inspiration you brought to the death of all of those Muggles, when the gas line supposedly burst, was thought provoking. I was astonished to find that it was Death Eaters disguised, as Aurors, who were to blame for all of the carnage, and when the ministry covered it up... well! Who knew??? An excellent thought process! Ingenius!

I love the interaction and true friendship you've developed between Jim and Sirius. The ribbing, although sounding harsh, has been smoothed out and gentled by your quick sense of humour. Sirius is a true gentle giant.

I also appreciate the fact that you were able to include Dobby in the Sirius story-line. I can't wait to see Dobby tell Sirius: "Dobby is sorry sir... but Dobby is not giving Mr. Sirius, sir, his fire whiskey, because Sir is not able to drink fire whiskey without losing his temper with Dobby, sir!" Goooo Dobby!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent chapter Connie. You've outdone yourself! You, my friend, are a great writer... and don't you forget it!

Katie

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