Hello Kae! I'm sorry I didn't post. I did read the chapter, and I was fixing to comment but got called away, and I guess I clicked on preview instead of submit. I am sorry I didn't make sure it posted like I usually do, so I will comment on both of them now. I loved them both first of all. I love it that Indie is able to have good times with the others. I'm afraid her care free days will soon be over, as will Harry's also. Hehehe, of course I'm just assuming this. Ginny is adorable showing her age with the jealousy of Indie, and Harry.Here
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In front of Indie was a stomping Ginny,
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“Fine,” was the abrupt and angry response she got from Ginny, before she stomped toward the kitchen a few floors down.
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Unfortunately, her usual seat – between Harry and Tonks – had been taken by Ginny,
I loved it!
Of the whole chapter though, this was my favorite part!
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Hermione, looking positively defeated, slumped and gazed at her feet, before turning back to Indie.
“Well, since you’ve now made it your business,” Hermione began, stumbling over her words. They must have been difficult ones, otherwise she wouldn’t have had such trouble with them.
“Will you help me?”
I love finding Hermione being human rather than the all knowing know it all that is portrayed in the movies.
Wonderful post, Kae, and beautifully written!
I hope the exams and special tasks are over with. And thank you for posting with all you have going on. I will be watching for your next post.