Once my mind starts working on a story, it doesn't stop...
I am adding a new point of view. We have only yet just had Sirius's and Sarah's point of View (thats what the lines are for) now I am adding Harry's and Draco's.

Harry looked at Sarah as she sat down, after the scene with Draco. 'Wow, we have a tough cookie on our hands' he thought. He remembered that Day they had first met, she had run into Kreacher's den then to her room. She had regained confidence since that talk with Hermione. 'I will never understand girls minds' he said to Ron
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Draco walked down the Train. No one except Potty, Weasel and the Mudblood had ever stood up to him. Where had she come from? He hadn't seen her before, she could only be a first year, yet she was as tall and looked the same age as him. It was strange.
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Sarah fell asleep. When she awoke, her stomach was rumbling. 'Have I missed the trolly?' she asked. 'Yes, but I took some money and brought you a bit of everything. Look' said hermione. Sarah looked. 'Ay vey. That's a lot.' Sarah said and help herself to a chocolate frog. 'Watch out, they jump.' said Harry. Sarah opened the wrapper and her frog jumped out. She grabbed it and bit its head of. 'Hey, my card has Dumbledore on it!' she exclaimed. 'He was my first one too.' said Harry. Sarah ate her sweets and the whole compartment started to nod off. Suddenly Sarah woke up, and heard voices. She didn't open her eyes, and she heard Draco Malfoy's voice. 'Come on, lets just go in and get her. She is just too good to be hanging round with those 3.' Sarah slowly took her wand out her pocket. She opened her eyes and pointed at Draco. 'Avis' she whispered and whole compartment woke with a start to see Draco running round with birds pecking at him. Laughter filled the train as the everyone watched Draco run back to his own compartment with birds following, pecking him at every chance they got. Hermione watched and said 'Was that you Sarah? That was really advanced magic.' Sarah giggled and nodded. 'Come on.' said Harry 'we better get changed.' The train pulled up at Hogwarts. The familiar voice of Rubas Hagrid filled the Air 'First years this way! Sarah Black? You're to come this way too!' Sarah said bye to her friends and made her way over to Hagrid. There was no room left in any of the boats so Sarah travelled on Hagrids knee. 'Duck!' yelled Hagrid and they all ducked under the stone archway. They turned a corner and then they saw Hogwarts....