05-19-2010, 11:20 PM
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 SS 100 Triumphant
DIMCPuffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
Posts: 1,825
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Jarvis
Second Year |  Horses Forever! l l Writer for Life l Yearbook alumnus
I'm back and loving every second of it Jools! 
This is brilliant! The drama between Ashtad and Hermia is brilliantly portrayed, the flashbacks add just enough explanation to the story, the characters are well defined, descriptions and dialogue are all wonderful...
Can't wait to read more! 
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