Owen!

Another fine chapter. You, my friend, have to quit doubting yourself and continue to write whatever enters your mind; your ideas are fantastic. I love the comraderie that is developing between Cei, Hugo and Albus. I also like the idea that you are slowly allowing your readers in on the true character of Cei. Anyone that has to work so hard to appear hard and untrusting, must be a great bloke at heart. At least, this is my opinion.

So, what's up with Teddy's new job in the Department of Mysteries...? Where are you going to take us with this plot, I wonder... I do hope you are keeping James safe; I don't think Ginny can take much more, when it comes to her kids. I think Cei and Ginny are doing her head in already!

Great work, as always. I look forward to your next chapter!
Katie