Hello Sophie, It was a very nice post, and when Gabrielle entered the kitchen and said she was to say sorry, I was wondering if she would have if she wasn't told to. At first I didn't think she would have, but when she asked to start over and plead when Ginny said no, I had second thoughts.
This part, I think is my favorite part of the post:
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"Yeah." He said "Night Ron," Harry held out his hand to Ron who instead of shaking it, gave him a man hug. "Night Hermionie" Harry gave her a hug and so did I. Despite my annoyance with Ron, I gave him a hug and kiss on the forehead. I can never stay mad at Ron. He is my favourite brother, and best friend.
And the reason I love it so much is self explanitory. Good job, and I'll be watching for your next post.