Connie!!!
I just read all of your latest posts! The story is getting more interesting by the second! I absolutely love it. I love the warmth and compassion Harry shows toward Crookshanks (despite Ron's attitude), I just love it all. I think you really capture Ron's personality! You have him funny and irksome at all the right parts (I especially loved the Harry half-naked scene

).
Can't wait to read more. Sorry it took so long!