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Old 04-30-2010, 11:51 AM   #136 (permalink)
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Yay Connie!!! Great chapter once again!

Yay Harry and his half naked body! Okay, okay, I know... I go too far! I love how you had Harry thinking it was Ginny who was screaming when the Dementors entered the compartment. This seems to foreshadow the deep relationship that will develop between Harry and Ginny in the future...

Again, I love how you are able to convey Ron's total lack of knowledge as to peoples' feelings and the situations around him. This boy definitely has a lot of growing up to do... mind you, we are talking about Ron!

I loved when you had Harry offer Crookshanks a piece of chocolate... like he was almost human...? The bond between Harry and Tom is really beginning to grow. I wish Tom could just jump-up and say, "Harry... it's me... your childhood buddy!" sigh... Soon, right?

I love the friendship between Ron and Harry. As dim as Ron is, Harry will never have a more loyal friend. Everyone deserves that kind of love.

Great chapter Connie. Keep it up. PAMS,
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