Owen!
Loved it, loved it, loved it! Now, I was going to ask why Bill was turning traitor, but I just read he was an informant, so, problem solved! I like the concept. So, does that make Griphook a double agent as well, since he told Ogranak to take Bill with him?
I LOVE Cei! He reminds me of a friend of mine. Funny... you never really know what's inside a person until you take the time to get to know them. I am really loving this story line. It also felt good to see a Malfoy put in his place...
This chapter has really started the ball rolling. I can't wait until the next one!
Note: A love potion would've been interesting though...
Great work!
Katie