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Lilly94 · 04-18-2010, 11:02 PM

Hey

everyone. This is my 4th FanFic that I have started. I do not own the Harry Potter world but I do own the characters

Disclaimer: J K Rowling for the entire Harry Potter Universe
Justin Bieber for the name and idea
Banner made by Becky at The Three Musketeers' Fort

Chapter Guide:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Chapter 1: New Girl
16 yr-old Justin Carter walked through the barrier to Platform 9 3/4 and saw that there were non of his friends there yet. He stood and waited for them to turn up. Eventually a tall brown haired boy, very much like Justin's, walked through the barrier with his cart loaded with his owl, his books and his trunk which had the Initials R.B. written in gold on the end. "Alright Carter. Long time no see mate" Ryan shouted to his mate who was still stood looking for his friend's. He finally turned to see Ryan. "Alright mate. Good Summer?" he asked Ryan. Ryan shrugged. "It was ok. A bit boring but ok. I went to Canada for a week" he replied. Justin looked to the ground. O how he missed his home state of Stratford. "What about you?" Ryan asked. Justin looked up again. "I went Ice-Skating with my family. Dad got re-married and Mum's still not settled down yet. Says after she split from Dad she wasn't getting married again" he explained. Ryan placed his hand on Justin's shoulder. "In other words she's rather be a single mum than be married to someone like your dad again" he replied. Justin shook Ryan's hand off his shoulder and gave him a stern look. "Don't say that about my Dad. It may not have worked our between him and mum but he's still a great Dad who loves me and Jaxon" he replied coldly. Ryan stepped back apologetically. He always seemed to say the wrong thing in this kind of situation. There was an awkward silence. Then Caitlin came walking through the barrier with her brother and her cart. "Alright lads" she said breaking the awkward silence. It was still awkwardly silent. Justin and Ryan said nothing. Then another girl walked onto the Platform. A girl no-one knew. A blonde haired girl with bright Blue eyes and pale skin. She seemed perfect. In Justin's eyes anyway.

"Excuse. Can someone direct me to the Hogwarts Express" the girl asked. Justin pointed to the train. The un-named girl smiled at Justin and shook his hand. "I'm Melanie" she said. Justin smiled back and shook her hand. "I'm Justin. This is Caitlin, Ryan and Christian" he said. Melanie shook everyone else's hand but paid particular attention to Justin. "I'm new to Hogwarts. I'm in Slytherin" she explained. Justin smirked. Ahhh! Great! Another Slytherin to be friend's with. "So are we. You can sit with us on the train if you want" Justin said sounding rather goofy. Melanie smiled and nodded. "I'd love to" she said. Justin smiled and boarded the train. Everyone else followed behind. "So where are you all from?" Melanie asked. "I'm from Canada" Justin replied. "We're also from Canada but a diifferent state to him." Cailtin replied. She finally got a word in edgeways. The rest of the train ride continued the same way. With cheerful conversation and everyone getting to know Melanie and vice-versa.

Hope you enjoy it

Please comment and feedback

~Sammi~

04-18-2010, 11:02 PM	#1 (permalink)
Lilly94 MO Crup Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 16,817 Hogwarts RPG Name: Elliott Patterson First Year	One Less Lonely Girl - Sa13+ Hey everyone. This is my 4th FanFic that I have started. I do not own the Harry Potter world but I do own the characters Disclaimer: J K Rowling for the entire Harry Potter Universe Justin Bieber for the name and idea Banner made by Becky at The Three Musketeers' Fort Chapter Guide: Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 1: New Girl 16 yr-old Justin Carter walked through the barrier to Platform 9 3/4 and saw that there were non of his friends there yet. He stood and waited for them to turn up. Eventually a tall brown haired boy, very much like Justin's, walked through the barrier with his cart loaded with his owl, his books and his trunk which had the Initials R.B. written in gold on the end. "Alright Carter. Long time no see mate" Ryan shouted to his mate who was still stood looking for his friend's. He finally turned to see Ryan. "Alright mate. Good Summer?" he asked Ryan. Ryan shrugged. "It was ok. A bit boring but ok. I went to Canada for a week" he replied. Justin looked to the ground. O how he missed his home state of Stratford. "What about you?" Ryan asked. Justin looked up again. "I went Ice-Skating with my family. Dad got re-married and Mum's still not settled down yet. Says after she split from Dad she wasn't getting married again" he explained. Ryan placed his hand on Justin's shoulder. "In other words she's rather be a single mum than be married to someone like your dad again" he replied. Justin shook Ryan's hand off his shoulder and gave him a stern look. "Don't say that about my Dad. It may not have worked our between him and mum but he's still a great Dad who loves me and Jaxon" he replied coldly. Ryan stepped back apologetically. He always seemed to say the wrong thing in this kind of situation. There was an awkward silence. Then Caitlin came walking through the barrier with her brother and her cart. "Alright lads" she said breaking the awkward silence. It was still awkwardly silent. Justin and Ryan said nothing. Then another girl walked onto the Platform. A girl no-one knew. A blonde haired girl with bright Blue eyes and pale skin. She seemed perfect. In Justin's eyes anyway. "Excuse. Can someone direct me to the Hogwarts Express" the girl asked. Justin pointed to the train. The un-named girl smiled at Justin and shook his hand. "I'm Melanie" she said. Justin smiled back and shook her hand. "I'm Justin. This is Caitlin, Ryan and Christian" he said. Melanie shook everyone else's hand but paid particular attention to Justin. "I'm new to Hogwarts. I'm in Slytherin" she explained. Justin smirked. Ahhh! Great! Another Slytherin to be friend's with. "So are we. You can sit with us on the train if you want" Justin said sounding rather goofy. Melanie smiled and nodded. "I'd love to" she said. Justin smiled and boarded the train. Everyone else followed behind. "So where are you all from?" Melanie asked. "I'm from Canada" Justin replied. "We're also from Canada but a diifferent state to him." Cailtin replied. She finally got a word in edgeways. The rest of the train ride continued the same way. With cheerful conversation and everyone getting to know Melanie and vice-versa. Hope you enjoy it Please comment and feedback ~Sammi~ __________________ I'm gonna swing from the chandelier, from the chandelier; I'm gonna live like tomorrow doesn't exist I'm gonna fly like a bird through the night, feel my tears as they dry; I'm gonna swing from the chandelier, from the chandelier Last edited by Lilly94; 01-08-2011 at 02:18 PM.