So, Emily, Tell me why you don't like it. I thought it was good.
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“What are you doing to yourself, Ems?” a voice asked quietly. Emily’s tears started almost immediately at the sound of the voice. She would know that voice anywhere, anytime.
Is this who I'm afraid it is?
Draco?Who ever it is I guess he saved her. I hope it was Sirius.
I also hope you can post very soon. I'll say one thing, I'm glad Emily has such good caring friends. I'll be watching for your next post. I think you should have more confidence in your writing ability. you're doing very well.