Hello Harita, I was so happy when I checked my e-mail and found you had posted! I see the strain of exams hasn't hurt your writing talent at all. What a beautiful post. You described evrything wonderfully. I felt all warm and happy in the atmosphere you provided for us. I felt like I was there among the festivities. And when Shaun and Sara met, the emotion you gave us to feel with them was incredible! Super post Harita. I love reading your story! I can't wait for more. The only thing I can say to help you is; spelling of the name, George. You spell it, Gorge, but it is George. But that's such a tiny little thing. Your story was just as wonderful, even with the way you spelled it. I'll be watching for more.